Poems and Poetry: You're My Heart
60You Stole My Heart
What have I done that you were
Sent to earth for the express purpose
Of stealing my heart
You’re like a potent wine that has
Gone to my head
I cherish you as something rare and precious
You ‘re not a mere woman in my opinion
You’re the very essence of the perfect
Womanhood
You’re as radiant as rainbow in the sky
You’re more magnetic than magnet
Your movement seemed as fluid as rippling
Water flowing over a submerged stone
I’m amazed by the depth of your beauty.








CloudExplorer Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago
The poem is ok, but needs a bit of work I think, just give it a read through or two, and you'll see what I mean.
The 'rainbow' line in particular, and 'movement' one especially. Maybe its your writing style of poetry, well anyhow good job though overall.
Thanks for sharing it with us all, I'll try a few more of your hubs, soon.